1) The pitch. Same as last time, 1-minute long. No Web cams. No sitting. Be dynamic! Upload the video to YouTube (as you do with all of your videos) and post the link.
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch. Describe what stood out to you as important, what feedback surprised you the most, what feedback you think was outright wrong or silly.
I got some really great feedback from my first elevator pitch! From the comments, it seemed that everyone thought my idea was really cool and they loved how it is calling attention to UF's goal towards sustainability. I think it is really important to focus my product around the goal of being more sustainable on the UF campus, and even campuses worldwide.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on the feedback, I changed my elevator pitch so that it was more focused on sustainability and the way that it can benefit UF's Office of Sustainability. I changed it so that my pitch starts out talking about sustainability and its importance rather than mentioning it towards the end, because it is what my whole concept is all about and I felt it needed to be mentioned right away. Now I am calling out my true customers who have strong values and opinions about being sustainable.
Hi Jennie! Great job overall! I really liked your idea overall. You did really well on taking what others said in their feedback from your first Elevator pitch and changing what you did in this Elevator pitch. I agree with what they said that by focusing more on sustainability your idea seems to be more important. You can look at my elevator pitch here: http://courtneysrymer.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteHello Jennie! I really like your pitch! I think that having solar powered charging stations all across the UF campus and college campuses everywhere would be tremendously beneficial to the earth's environment as a whole. A sustainable approach to energy would be very popular to students everywhere. Check out my blog: https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=2458344027561127149#allposts
ReplyDeleteHi Jennie,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job. I really love your idea, having solar powered charging stations around college campuses would be very helpful for the planet. It is very nice see ideas like this one that in the end are for everyone's convenience. Next time try to do a pitch more interactive and less serious because that would keep people attach to your blog. here is mine!
http://nataliagarcia2022.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html